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Friday 17 April 2020

how I have fun with my family

How I have fun with my family

Hi everyone! Today I have a blog post to share with you about how I have fun with my family. It's kinda short I might update it to make it look better and put more writing how is everyone doing in quarantine? Hope you are doing well that's all for day Bye!

Goal: Next time I want to make it longer and make it look nicer. (kinda rushed it)





2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Riley.
    You have done a good job with this even though you say you rushed it. You could add some pictures to it because visuals make the audience more interested and engaged. Well done for giving an explanation of what the post is about.

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  2. So very good to see you giving an explanation for your posts.I agree that maybe some pictures would of jazzed it up a lot.I think you already know .Where did you go for a picnic? Really great ideas, maybe pictures of you and your family doing these things.Stay awesome Riley.

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