I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello everyone! Today I have a google drawing to show it's about being on time! Sorry if it's not the best I tried I really couldn't think of what to put but I did it in the end!
Kia ora Riley. Well done for completing this task on time. Your ideas in this activity are really good and make sense. The only thing that might need thinking about for next time, is that your text colour is quite hard to read. I am really impressed with how you have been on time with getting your learning tasks completed. Ka pai!
I agree with Ms Waho, great work just difficult to read.An easy fix for your next piece of work.Well done Riley, and yes you did get there in the end.Way to go.Stay awesome.
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Kia ora Riley.
ReplyDeleteWell done for completing this task on time. Your ideas in this activity are really good and make sense. The only thing that might need thinking about for next time, is that your text colour is quite hard to read.
I am really impressed with how you have been on time with getting your learning tasks completed. Ka pai!
I agree with Ms Waho, great work just difficult to read.An easy fix for your next piece of work.Well done Riley, and yes you did get there in the end.Way to go.Stay awesome.
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