I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Riley, I like your reasons about each value, but I think people could read it better if you did the reasons and ideas in their own paragraph. But I like it just as much! Bye Riley!
Hi Mikayla thank you for the comment thank you for leting me know i will do that if a don't forget when i was doing this it looked easy to read but now it hard to read thank for the comment i have to go bye!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Riley, I like your reasons about each value, but I think people could read it better if you did the reasons and ideas in their own paragraph. But I like it just as much! Bye Riley!
ReplyDeleteHi Mikayla thank you for the comment thank you for leting me know i will do that if a don't forget when i was doing this it looked easy to read but now it hard to read thank for the comment i have to go bye!
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