I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi RIlEY this is linny and phoebe we saw or work it is cool that means you love the teachers you are a great a friend even phoebe loves you the new and cool girl you are also cool 8 did you enjoy doing this work me and phoebe loved it wow you knocked my socks off did you think it was fun the facts you have used are really good. how did you do it this tells me that you like all the teachers and i know that you already love the teacher once again you are cool amazing great awesome
Hi Linny and phoebe thank you for this big comment! i like how you and phoebe like my work thank you for calling me cool amazing and all those words well are i great friend to have in this school. when i was reading this it made me smile thank you for making me smile. well i have to go bye Linny and phoebe.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi RIlEY this is linny and phoebe we saw or work it is cool that means you love the teachers you are a great a friend even phoebe loves you the new and cool girl you are also cool 8 did you enjoy doing this work me and phoebe loved it wow you knocked my socks off did you think it was fun the facts you have used are really good. how did you do it this tells me that you like all the teachers and i know that you already love the teacher once again you are cool amazing great awesome
ReplyDeleteHi Linny and phoebe thank you for this big comment! i like how you and phoebe like my work thank you for calling me cool amazing and all those words well are i great friend to have in this school. when i was reading this it made me smile thank you for making me smile. well i have to go bye Linny and phoebe.
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