I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
You have started to form some good ideas Riley. I agree with not playing game when you are supposed to be working. Perhaps you could think about what nice looks like or sounds like, and then it might help you to explain it in your presentation.
Kia ora Riley. I think you have been really good at being positive online because you are getting the expected work completed. I agree with Ms Speden that if you don't know what to write for your introduction, just explain what we were learning and what we had to do. You don't need to let the audience know that you don't know what to write because what you had written already was fine.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
You have started to form some good ideas Riley. I agree with not playing game when you are supposed to be working. Perhaps you could think about what nice looks like or sounds like, and then it might help you to explain it in your presentation.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Riley.
ReplyDeleteI think you have been really good at being positive online because you are getting the expected work completed.
I agree with Ms Speden that if you don't know what to write for your introduction, just explain what we were learning and what we had to do. You don't need to let the audience know that you don't know what to write because what you had written already was fine.