I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi, I'm back with another slide! about.. giraffes I mean you should from the title of this! & no I did not make another giraffe slide this is my first one! anyway here it is! hope you enjoy!
Bounjor Riley it is Lacie here. I like your blog post about giraffes and the black giraffe and the white giraffe look quite cool. What is your favourite animal?
kia ora riley good job on this you have done a great job on this really like this very much i like hoe said a little about giraffes and more good job riley keep up the good work.
Kia Ora Riley, Kirsty here! I think this blog post is cool because I love learning about giraffes. I like the fact you learned about giraffes before you did this blog post. Next time you could add facts like how many giraffes are left in the world etc. Do you like giraffes? Did you like learning about giraffes? Bye
hey Riley its Benaiah here i liked the way you put the black and white giraffes they look cool you brought me back to when we did some facts about the animal we saw at orana park next time you could see if you have spelling mistake see you later bye
Kia Ora Riley! My favourite part is the white giraffe because I really love white animals and I've never seen a white giraffe before! The facts you have used are good. I like the facts that how giraffes sleep, I never thought that a giraffe can sleep with eyes open about 3 to 5 minutes, so cool!I noticed that the photos of your giraffe is great but you can use some facts about the giraffes like what they can do, It is great and good and I love it!, bye!
Hi Riley I'm Raewyn I enjoyed the part when you showed us the White Giraffes and the Black Giraffes I didn't even know there were black ones and White ones. This reminded me of when we started feeding the giraffes but there is none black and white giraffes but I remember part. Next time, you could show us more about giraffes... wait... this might be a silly question but do the white giraffes, normal giraffes & black giraffes do something different? well maybe you can put that silly question in. btw thanks for showing us that. From: Raewyn
Hi Raewyn, black & white giraffes are just like other giraffes they do the same thing did you know that black & white giraffes are rare! anyway i hope you enjoy your day bye!
Kia ora it's Nikau.i like how when you go to the next part of the slide it flips over.that's really weird that there is white Giraffe and a black giraffe.next time can you plz find more different giraffes.
Kia Ora Riley, I really like your information slide about giraffes, I also like how you put the black and white giraffe in. Maybe next time you could put facts about the giraffes you put in it. Still a great blog post so great job. Blog You Later.
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Bounjor Riley it is Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about giraffes and the black giraffe and the white giraffe look quite cool.
What is your favourite animal?
kia ora riley
ReplyDeletegood job on this you have done a great job on this really like this very much i like hoe said a little about giraffes and more good job riley keep up the good work.
Kia Ora Riley, Kirsty here! I think this blog post is cool because I love learning about giraffes. I like the fact you learned about giraffes before you did this blog post. Next time you could add facts like how many giraffes are left in the world etc. Do you like giraffes? Did you like learning about giraffes? Bye
ReplyDeletehey Riley its Benaiah here
ReplyDeletei liked the way you put the black and white giraffes they look cool
you brought me back to when we did some facts about the animal we saw at orana park
next time you could see if you have spelling mistake
see you later bye
Kia Ora Riley! My favourite part is the white giraffe because I really love white animals and I've never seen a white giraffe before! The facts you have used are good. I like the facts that how giraffes sleep, I never thought that a giraffe can sleep with eyes open about 3 to 5 minutes, so cool!I noticed that the photos of your giraffe is great but you can use some facts about the giraffes like what they can do, It is great and good and I love it!, bye!
ReplyDeletehi Riley its micah i enjoyed the part when you did your slide about Giraffes it is amazing and perfect and good i will catch you up bye
ReplyDeleteHi Riley I'm Raewyn I enjoyed the part when you showed us the White Giraffes and the Black Giraffes I didn't even know there were black ones and White ones. This reminded me of when we started feeding the giraffes but there is none black and white giraffes but I remember part. Next time, you could show us more about giraffes... wait... this might be a silly question but do the white giraffes, normal giraffes & black giraffes do something different? well maybe you can put that silly question in. btw thanks for showing us that. From: Raewyn
ReplyDeleteHi Raewyn, black & white giraffes are just like other giraffes they do the same thing did you know that black & white giraffes are rare! anyway i hope you enjoy your day bye!
DeleteKia ora it's Nikau.i like how when you go to the next part of the slide it flips over.that's really weird that there is white Giraffe and a black giraffe.next time can you plz find more different giraffes.
ReplyDeleteHi riley good facts I never new they had a full pack blood next time put more facts ok buy
ReplyDeleteHi Riley its brodie here i like your post this part gave me a memory of when we had to do it.why did you pick a giraffes.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Riley,
ReplyDeleteI really like your information slide about giraffes, I also like how you put the black and white giraffe in. Maybe next time you could put facts about the giraffes you put in it. Still a great blog post so great job.
Blog You Later.